Being a Hero

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Being a Hero

Beitragvon Andrea O'Down » Sa 3. Mär 2012, 01:34

Bloß ein kleines Gedicht, das ich vor vielen Jahren geschrieben und nun wiedergefunden habe. Es ist entstanden, weil ich über Helden nachgedacht habe, die eine geheime Identität haben.
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Being a Hero

You want to stop them crying,
you want to make their life a better one.
But you can't stop the dying
because all the hope is gone.
You want to be their light
but you have to take to flight
when the day begins.
Who is it then who wins?

Is it worth being a hero?
Risking your life for people
you will never know?
Is it worth facing the dark side?
Even if you know that it is you
who has to hide? –
Behind a mask.

When the crime is asleep
it is your time to rest.
But the rest you cannot keep
'cause for you it's not the best.
You have to be prepared
every hour – night and day.
But aren't you a little scared
that too long could stay?

Is it worth being a hero?
Risking your life for people
you will never know?
Is it worth facing the dark side?
Even if you know that it is you
who has to hide? –
Behind a mask.

These are the thoughts of a hero.
This is what you have to know.
This even shows your fears, too.
But you will do what you have to do.
Because if they understand what you're figthing for
your mission is complete.
This will open to a better world the door
And lighten up the darkest street.

And so it's worth being a hero,
risking your life for people
you will never know.
It is worth facing the dark side.
And you know that you don't have to hide. –
Behind a mask.
Because you know
what you have found:
It is you who wears the mask. –
And not the other way 'round.
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Re: Being a Hero

Beitragvon Mad-Cat » Sa 3. Mär 2012, 02:20

Na dann wollen wir mal:
Ich mag den Rhythmus dieses Gedichtes ganz besonders, da es sich so beinahe - wenn nicht ganz - wie ein Song liest.
Auch finde ich es tiefgründig vom Sinn her, man fühlt richtig, wie der "Held" sich fühlt!
Desweiteren finde ich es bewundernswert, dass es sich auch wirklich reimt.
In kurz: Ich LIEBE es! ;)
Lass uns das Mann gegen Ente regeln...
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Re: Being a Hero

Beitragvon Andrea O'Down » Sa 3. Mär 2012, 02:30

Awwwww, danke, Cat! ^^ Freut mich, dass dir das Gedicht gefällt. :)
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